OMG, this is fabulous......I will read it over and over as I bask in the 80 degree (VERY tiresome) weather here, wondering whether (or should I say "weather") or not to turn on the air conditioner! How I long for snow!!! Seriously, this is January for chrissakes! Enough already! Tomorrow should be a better 56 degrees....if only! I will gladly put on my sweatshirt and call it a winter day. Hrrmph!
Lovely, T! Brava!
I like this a lot: the "umbered clouds batten/the horizon" move is great because its such an isolated moment in the details of daily life. & it's always good to see someone get macaroni & cheese into a poem.Nice work.JH
I still say its good that we got out from under the quilts and flannel to get our butts up to the gym.
Exactly!And to Ima Wizer, I can hear the really tiny violins playing. No snow now, just the early and complete darkness.