Friday, January 13, 2012

Sentence 3

Admittedly, she had a thing for boots, preferably black, the more buckles and straps the better, the longer-the cord-to-tie-around-her-ankle-the-better.

5 comments:

  1. T, is this your own short fiction? I'm glad I happened upon it. More, please.

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  2. There's that trick in the sentence, I think, something about a cord wrapping not around what you might expect, but the ankle.

    Interesting.

    More.

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  3. i love the way youre unfurling this....

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  4. This is the 21st-century version of Dickens!

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